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2020-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Do you think that it is necessary to recycle things? I think recycling things is definitely necessary for saving resources and protecting our environment. We are curruntly consuming lots of natural resources such as, oils, coals, trees, and so on. Some say that natural resources are going to get out of stock in approximately 50 years. We cannot predict exact date of the day but, the natural resources are limited and we need to save them as much as we can. That\'s why I am thinking that recyling things is necessary and I am trying to do it as much as possible. For example, I try to not use disposable products. When I had to use disposable products then I recycled them if it\'s possible. That\'s why I have several plastic containers and spoons in my house.

강사 첨삭

Hello again [이름]~

I really enjoyed reading this!

I didn\'t think you recycled since you are always busy and you like eating out as well.

But, good job!

Thank you for doing your part for the environment.

I think recycling things is definitely necessary for saving resources and protecting our environment.

>>CORRECT

We are curruntly consuming lots of natural resources such as, oils, coals, trees, and so on.

>>We are currently consuming a lot of natural resources such as oil,coals,trees, and so on.

Some say that natural resources are going to get out of stock in approximately 50 years.

>>Some say that our natural resources are depleting in approximately 50 years.

We cannot predict exact date of the day but, the natural resources are limited and we need to save them as much as we can.

>>We cannot predict the exact date of the day but, the natural resources are limited and we need to save them as much as we can.

That\'s why I am thinking that recyling things is necessary and I am trying to do it as much as possible.

>>That\'s why I am thinking that recycling things is necessary and I am trying to do it as much as possible.

For example, I try to not use disposable products.

>>CORRECT

When I had to use disposable products then I recycled them if it\'s possible.

>> CORRECT

That\'s why I have several plastic containers and spoons in my house.

>>CORRECT

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