homework
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Essay: If the interviewer asks you what your strengths are, how would respond?
Your question makes me think back myself
Suddenly I feel sad~~~
A few minutes ago, I had a confidence as much as I can
But I think I have nothing , can\'t do anything now
I thought I had worked hard anything
I am going to look back my around, my life
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Oh I am sorry but I don\'t mean to make you feel sad. I just want to make you think about the question. Anyway, working hard is good and you have done well for your family, so I am sure your loved one are so proud of you. You did well!
-Rachel
Your question makes me think back myself. Suddenly I feel sad~~~
>> Your question makes me reflect on myself and suddenly I feel sad.
A few minutes ago, I had a confidence as much as I can
A few minutes ago, I had a confidence as much as I can
>> A few minutes ago, I had much confidence in myself.
But I think I have nothing , can\'t do anything now
But I think I have nothing , can\'t do anything now
>> But now I think I have nothing.
I thought I had worked hard anything
I thought I had worked hard anything
>> I thought I worked hard for in everything.
I am going to look back my around, my life
I am going to look back my around, my life
>> I should reflect more on my life.
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