Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think you can personally do to reduce your chance of being infected in a pandemic?
There are few things that I can do in my dairy life.
First, I can bring and use hand senitizer everyday to keep my hand clean.
Second, I can wear a mask when I\'m out of the house.
Third, I can drink enough water and work out regularly to keep in good health.
So, those are the things that I can do to protect my self in a pandemic.
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There are few things that I can do in my dairy life.
>> There are a few things that I can do in my daily life.
First, I can bring and use hand senitizer everyday to keep my hand clean.
First, I can bring and use hand senitizer everyday to keep my hand clean.
>> First, I can bring and use hand sanitizer everyday to keep my hands clean.
Second, I can wear a mask when I\'m out of the house.
Second, I can wear a mask when I\'m out of the house.
>> Correct
Third, I can drink enough water and work out regularly to keep in good health.
Third, I can drink enough water and work out regularly to keep in good health.
>> Third, I can drink enough water and work out regularly to maintain my good health.
So, those are the things that I can do to protect my self in a pandemic.
So, those are the things that I can do to protect my self in a pandemic.
>> So, those are the things that I can do to protect myself in a pandemic.
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