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2020-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Nowdays, COVID-19 is dangerous disease. To keep us safe from such illnesses or diseases, first, we should wash hands clean. Second, we have to wear a mask. Last, we shouldn\'t go to crowded places.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. It\'s nice to get your opinion about such issues. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. ^_^
Teacher Irene
Nowdays, COVID-19 is dangerous disease. 
>>> Nowadays, COVID-19 is considered as a dangerous disease.
To keep us safe from such illnesses or diseases, first, we should wash hands clean. 
>>> To keep us safe from such illness or disease, we must first wash our hands clean. 
Second, we have to wear a mask. 
>>> Correct. 
Last, we shouldn\'t go to crowded places.
>>> Correct.

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