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I think my country has effective plastic management rules.
These days many plastic wastes.
So the government has come up with a plan to reduce plastic wastes.
First, Do not use plastic cups in cafes.
Second, Do plastic recycling well.
Maybe these rules will make effective plastic management.
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>>correct
These days many plastic wastes.
These days many plastic wastes.
>>These days, there are many plastic wastes.
So the government has come up with a plan to reduce plastic wastes.
So the government has come up with a plan to reduce plastic wastes.
>>correct
First, Do not use plastic cups in cafes.
First, Do not use plastic cups in cafes.
>>correct
Second, Do plastic recycling well.
Second, Do plastic recycling well.
>>correct
Maybe these rules will make effective plastic management.
Maybe these rules will make effective plastic management.
>>Maybe these rules will be effective plastic management.
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