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Do you think it\'s possible to eradicate poverty in the world? In your country? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I can\'t tell that eradicating poverty is possible.
In this world, there are many selfish people and they only think about themselves.
For example, there are people who embezzle money and stuff for people who are in poverty.
Many organizations and governments are trying to reduce the number of people who are in poverty.
However, that\'s quite difficult because eradicating poverty isn\'t a problem for countries.
That is a problem for everyone in the world.
So, I think poverty can be eradicated when more and more people realize the problem and try to eradicate that.
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I can\'t tell that eradicating poverty is possible.
>> I can\'t say that eradicating poverty is possible.
In this world, there are many selfish people and they only think about themselves.
In this world, there are many selfish people and they only think about themselves.
>> Correct
For example, there are people who embezzle money and stuff for people who are in poverty.
For example, there are people who embezzle money and stuff for people who are in poverty.
>> For example, there are people who embezzle money and stuff for people who are suffering from poverty.
Many organizations and governments are trying to reduce the number of people who are in poverty.
Many organizations and governments are trying to reduce the number of people who are in poverty.
>> Many organizations and governments are trying to reduce the number of people who are suffering from poverty.
However, that\'s quite difficult because eradicating poverty isn\'t a problem for countries.
However, that\'s quite difficult because eradicating poverty isn\'t a problem for countries.
>> Correct
That is a problem for everyone in the world.
That is a problem for everyone in the world.
>> Correct
So, I think poverty can be eradicated when more and more people realize the problem and try to eradicate that.
So, I think poverty can be eradicated when more and more people realize the problem and try to eradicate that.
>> Correct
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