Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Does your government give any free food for its people?
-Yes.My government give free food to low-income and senior citizens.
Have you seen someone starving in your country? Would you help starving people?
-I\'ve seen it on the news. But I don\'t want it .
I would rather help people around me.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Mr. [이름] [이름]!
~Lucy
Yes.My government give free food to low-income and senior citizens.
>>Yes.My government gives free food to low-income and senior citizens.
I\'ve seen it on the news.
>>CORRECT!
But I don\'t want it .
>>CORRECT!
I would rather help people around me.>>CORRECT!
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