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2020-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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You gave me question, Can you name some chores that needs to be done everyday? first, I wash the my container which I bring some fruit in my company. Second, I clean my room floor After I use hairdrier, my hair is fallen in my room...... I dont know why If I dont clean after that, My room is really messy and dirty. That is my answer , I am so sorry I am late to do this... Thank you for reading!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

You gave me question, Can you name some chores that needs to be done everyday?
>> You gave me this question, \"Can you name some chores that needs to be done everyday?\"
first, I wash the my container which I bring some fruit in my company.
>> First, I wash the container where I put the fruits which I bring to my company.
Second, I clean my room floor 

>> Second, I clean the floor in my room.

After I use hairdrier, my hair is fallen in my room...... I dont know why

>> After I using my hairdryer, my hair is all over the floor in my room and I don\'t know why.
If I dont clean after that, My room is really messy and dirty.
>> If I don\'t clean after using my hairdryer, my room would be really messy and dirty.
That is my answer , 

>> That is my answer.

I am so sorry I am late to do this...

>> I am so sorry I was late in finishing this.
Thank you for reading!

>> CORRECT!


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Hi [이름]!

No worries about doing your homework late. The important thing is you still accomplished it. Thank you for doing your homework, keep up the good work!


--->T.Christina

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