Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
You gave me question, Can you name some chores that needs to be done everyday?
>> You gave me this question, \"Can you name some chores that needs to be done everyday?\"
first, I wash the my container which I bring some fruit in my company.
>> First, I wash the container where I put the fruits which I bring to my company.
Second, I clean my room floor
>> Second, I clean the floor in my room.
After I use hairdrier, my hair is fallen in my room...... I dont know why
>> After I using my hairdryer, my hair is all over the floor in my room and I don\'t know why.
If I dont clean after that, My room is really messy and dirty.
>> If I don\'t clean after using my hairdryer, my room would be really messy and dirty.
That is my answer ,
>> That is my answer.
I am so sorry I am late to do this...
>> I am so sorry I was late in finishing this.
Thank you for reading!
>> CORRECT!
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Hi [이름]!
No worries about doing your homework late. The important thing is you still accomplished it. Thank you for doing your homework, keep up the good work!
--->T.Christina
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