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2020-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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I want to be a illustrator in the future. Because, I like draw. drawing like my friend. And very fun. Teacher, thank you for teaching. I want good student. I can not speak English very well. But, I\'ll try my best.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] A!  Happy Wednesday!  Thank you for doing your best dear.  I really want to help you. ^_^
Teacher Irene
I want to be a illustrator in the future.
>>> I want to be AN illustrator in the future.
Because, I like draw. 
>>> Because, I like drawing. 
drawing like my friend. And very fun.
>>> I like drawing with my friend. It\'s really fun. 
Teacher, thank you for teaching.
>>> Teacher, thank you for teaching me.
I want good student.
>>> I want  to be a good student.
I cannot speak English very well.
>>> CORRECT.
But, I\'ll try my best.
>>> CORRECT.

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