Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you associate any smells with any time in the past? Which smells and what memories do they bring back? Explain in 5 sentences or more.
There aren\'t any smells that I remember. I traveled some countries but there weren\'t special smells.
However, there are some smells that I love. For example, a smell of sea, lilac, and sweet fruits.
I hear that every seasons has specific smell. But,I\'ve never experienced that.
Someday, I want to smell seasons, especially winter.
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There aren\'t any smells that I remember.
>> There aren\'t any smells that make me remember.
I traveled some countries but there weren\'t special smells.
>> Correct
However, there are some smells that I love.
However, there are some smells that I love.
>> Correct
For example, a smell of sea, lilac, and sweet fruits.
>> For example, I love the smell of the sea, lilacs, and sweet fruits.
I hear that every seasons has specific smell.
I hear that every seasons has specific smell.
>> I hear that every season has a specific smell.
But,I\'ve never experienced that.
>> However, I\'ve never experienced that.
Someday, I want to smell seasons, especially winter.
Someday, I want to smell seasons, especially winter.
>> Someday, I want to know the smell of seasons, especially winter.
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