Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is my homework. Thank you teacher !
강사 첨삭
Good evening!
These days bystanders don\'t help people immediately, but they do take videos or photos first.
I think that\'s the disadvantage of technology and social media.
Anyhow, here\'s the correction.
Thank you!
First, I need to understand this question more deeply.
>>First, I need to understand this question deeply.
And it means that bystanders are worse than bad people.
>>CORRECT!
In my case, I really agree with this saying.
>>CORRECT!
If we have people who are planning to commit bad things, we have to say “no” to them.
>>CORRECT!
OR: If there are people who want to do bad things to us, we should say no to them.
It’s real friend, and honest relationship.
>>That\'s what a real friend is and an honest relationship.
I think great relationship between person to person is not only saying “Great” when they did accomplishment, but also saying “Stop” and critics when they did evil.
>>I think a great relationship between person to person is not only saying “Great” when they did an accomplishment, but also saying “Stop” and criticize them when they do evil things.
Unless say that and let go them, I think they are also same people who do evil.
>>Unless you just let the person do it, then I think you are both evil.
I know it’s really hard to say, it need huge courage, but it’s right thing I think.
>>I know it\'s really hard to say, but it takes a lot of courage, but I think it\'s right.
So if you have a people who have bad mind, persuade them firmly.
>>So if you know people who have bad mind, persuade them firmly.
In other ways, only a few people do evil, but there are many who watch them.
>>On the other hand, only a small number of people do evil, but there are many people who just watch them.
So Albert Einstein’s saying means bystanders are same with criminals, and at the end, the world will be destroyed.
>>So Albert Einstein\'s words mean that bystanders are like criminals, and at the end of the day the world will be destroyed.
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