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Do you compare prices at different stores when you shop?
I think it depends on where I shop. When I shop offline I don\'t like to compare prices at different stores because I don\'t like to move around between shops. Also, it takes time and I am not sure that I can save that much money to save. Additionally, It makes me tired and bored. However, I like to compare prices when I shop online. I can access any online malls with only a few clicks so it\'s convenient and fast. Also, it absolutely helps saving money with a few minutes.
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I think it depends on where I shop.
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When I shop offline I don\'t like to compare prices at different stores because I don\'t like to move around between shops.
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Also, it takes time and I am not sure that I can save that much money to save.
>>Also, it takes time and I am not sure if I have enough money to save.
Additionally, It makes me tired and bored.
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However, I like to compare prices when I shop online.
>>CORRECT
I can access any online malls with only a few clicks so it\'s convenient and fast.
>>CORRECT
Also, it absolutely helps saving money with a few minutes.
>>CORRECT
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