Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. That man is the man who I spoke to him the other day.
2. They elected a new mayor and his aim is to help the poor.
3. I really like the car when I bought it last year.
4. Mr. [Name] took over the company because his wife died last year.
5. The restaurant is the best in town and we usually eat there.
6. The film is about a woman because her son mysteriously disappers.
7. That is the place when I grew up there.
8. I met a woman who her husband is a famous producer.
9. The man was arrested yestersay who escaped from prison a week ago.
10. The bag is heavy which contains a lot of presents.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job! I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!
Take care!!!
T. Jeny
>>correct
2. They elected a new mayor and his aim is to help the poor.
2. They elected a new mayor and his aim is to help the poor.
>>They elected a new mayor whose aim is to help the poor.
3. I really like the car when I bought it last year.
3. I really like the car when I bought it last year.
>>I really like the car (that, which) I bought last year.
4. Mr. [Name] took over the company because his wife died last year.
4. Mr. [Name] took over the company because his wife died last year.
>>Mr. [Name], whose wife died last year, took over the company.
5. The restaurant is the best in town and we usually eat there.
5. The restaurant is the best in town and we usually eat there.
>>The restaurant where we usually eat is the best in town.
6. The film is about a woman because her son mysteriously disappears.
6. The film is about a woman because her son mysteriously disappears.
>>This film is about a woman whose son mysteriously disappears.
7. That is the place when I grew up there.
7. That is the place when I grew up there.
>>That is the place where I grew up.
8. I met a woman who her husband is a famous producer.
8. I met a woman who her husband is a famous producer.
>>I met a woman whose husband is a famous producer.
9. The man was arrested yestersay who escaped from prison a week ago.
9. The man was arrested yestersay who escaped from prison a week ago.
>>The man who escaped from prison a week ago was arrested yesterday.
10. The bag is heavy which contains a lot of presents.
10. The bag is heavy which contains a lot of presents.
>>correct
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