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Some people don\'t use email any more, because they prefer social networks. What do you think about this? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I can understand people who don\'t use email.
This is because I also don\'t use email except for work.
Even though many people use social networks, I\'m not sure that can replace email.
In the future, something will replace email.
However, I don\'t know what that is yet.
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I can understand people who don\'t use email.
>> Correct
This is because I also don\'t use email except for work.
This is because I also don\'t use email except for work.
>> Correct
Even though many people use social networks, I\'m not sure that can replace email.
>> Even though many people use social networks, I\'m not sure they can replace email.
In the future, something will replace email.
In the future, something will replace email.
>> Correct
However, I don\'t know what that is yet.
However, I don\'t know what that is yet.
>> Correct
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