Homework
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Essay: What should you do to remember the things that you want to say?
When I don\'t have my phone, I wrote it on my note
However I save it on my phone now
Sometimes while I take a walk near home , I see it ^^
My phone is saved many writings : English words, idiom, sentences, proverb, pop songs, writings that I like in the books... etc.
At the beginning, I saw those hard now I am being lazy more and more ,
Can I ask you what you should to do to remember what you want to say, too?
I love you^*^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I love you too! ^ ^ Thank you for sharing what you do when you don\'t remember something. In my case, I do the same thing as you-write it on a note or save it on my phone, but sometimes I even forget that I saved it on my phone, OMG! ^ ^
-Rachel
When I don\'t have my phone, I wrote it on my note
>> When I don\'t have my phone, I write it on my note.
However I save it on my phone now
However I save it on my phone now
>> correct
>> I save everything in my phone now.
Sometimes while I take a walk near home , I see it ^^
Sometimes while I take a walk near home , I see it ^^
>> correct
>> I go through it when I take a walk near my home.
My phone is saved many writings : English words, idiom, sentences, proverb, pop songs, writings that I like in the books... etc.
My phone is saved many writings : English words, idiom, sentences, proverb, pop songs, writings that I like in the books... etc.
>> My phone is used for saving many writings: English words, idioms, sentences, proverbs, pop songs, writings that I like from books, and so on.
At the beginning, I saw those hard now I am being lazy more and more ,
At the beginning, I saw those hard now I am being lazy more and more ,
>> At the beginning, I tried checking them every now and then but now I am becoming lazier.
Can I ask you what you should to do to remember what you want to say, too?
Can I ask you what you should to do to remember what you want to say, too?
>> correct
I love you^*^
>> correct
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