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2020-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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If you suddenly started to suffer from a strange pain, what would you do? Who would you speak to? Where would you go? Answer in 5 sentences or more. I can answer this question easily. If I have a strange pain, I\'ll tell my family. After telling my family, I\'ll go to a clinic near my house. If the doctor doesn\'t know what makes the pain, I\'ll go to the hospital. Then, I\'ll get medical check up to figure out the cause of the pain.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
There are just a couple of reminders below.
These are simple grammar rules that I hope you keep in mind.
Take care of your articles, too.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I can answer this question easily.
>> Correct
If I have a strange pain, I\'ll tell my family.
>> Correct
After telling my family, I\'ll go to a clinic near my house.
>> Correct
If the doctor doesn\'t know what makes the pain, I\'ll go to the hospital.
>> If the doctor doesn\'t know what causes the pain, I\'ll go to the hospital.
Then, I\'ll get medical check up to figure out the cause of the pain.
>> Then, I\'ll get a medical check up to figure out the cause of the pain.

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