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2020-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Are you a fashionable person? Do you like designer brands like Chanel? Which season is it the easiest to be fashionable in your country? - Oh, I\'m not a fashionable person but I want to be a fashionable person.^^ I prefer Louis Vuitton, Gucci, Bottega to Chanel. But my wife loves Chanel. Korea is too sensitive to fashion. So the season doesn\'t matter.That\'s not good. I guess, The opposite of white is black. Why not call it red lie, not black lie?

강사 첨삭

Thank you Mr. [이름] [이름]!
Yes, the opposite of white is black. Moreover, we can talk about the colors of lie tomorrow. There are four which are white lie, gray lie, black lie and red lie. We\'ll differentiate it tomorrow. :) 
~Lucy

 Oh, I\'m not a fashionable person but I want to be a fashionable person.^^
>>CORRECT!
I prefer Louis Vuitton, Gucci, Bottega to Chanel. 
>>CORRECT!
But my wife loves Chanel.
>>CORRECT!
Korea is too sensitive to fashion.
>>CORRECT!
 So the season doesn\'t matter.
>>CORRECT!
That\'s not good.
>>CORRECT!

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