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2020-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q.What do you usually do when you get angry? A. When i ger angry, I usually watch the Youtube with snacks on the bed. When i do this, I can feel to take a rest and I don\'t have to think anything at that time. I think that I can get positive energy during the rest. After that, I feel better than before.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

When i ger angry, I usually watch the Youtube with snacks on the bed.

>> When I get angry, I usually watch YouTube while eating snacks on my bed.
When i do this, I can feel to take a rest and I don\'t have to think anything at that time.

>> Whenever I do this, I can take a rest and I don\'t have to think about anything at the time.
I think that I can get positive energy during the rest.

>> I think I can get a positive energy during a time of rest.
After that, I feel better than before.

>> CORRECT!

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