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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Would you rather buy a new cellphone or computer now?
I don\'t need to buy new ones for now. If I have limitless money then I would buy them every month but I don\'t have that much money. Also, I bought a new laptop for about 6 months ago and I bought a new smartphone last month. Both of them are working nicely for now. By the way, I normally use my gadgets as long as it works well. For example, I had used my earlier smartphone for more than 3 years and I decided to buy a new one because of its battery problem. I couldn\'t use it without any charger outside.
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I don\'t need to buy new ones for now.
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If I have limitless money then I would buy them every month but I don\'t have that much money.
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Also, I bought a new laptop for about 6 months ago and I bought a new smartphone last month.
>>Also, I bought a new laptop about 6 months ago and I bought a new smartphone last month.
Both of them are working nicely for now.
>>CORRECT
By the way, I normally use my gadgets as long as it works well.
>>CORRECT
For example, I had used my earlier smartphone for more than 3 years and I decided to buy a new one because of its battery problem.
>>CORRECT
I couldn\'t use it without any charger outside.
>>CORRECT
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