Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there much interesting architecture in your country? Describe them in complete sentences.
Honestly, I don\'t interested in architecture.
I think that the most interesting architecture in Korea is Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral.
I like catholic cathedral because those are so beautiful, especially inside of the cathedral.
So, the reason why I like Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral is that is beautiful and holy.
Fun fact: I\'m not a catholic, but I like cathedral.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Let\'s focus on capitalization, generalization and relative pronouns.
Overall, this is a thing of beauty.
Let\'s minimize the corrections next time.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Honestly, I don\'t interested in architecture.
>> Honestly, I\'m not interested in architecture.
I think that the most interesting architecture in Korea is Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral.
I think that the most interesting architecture in Korea is Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral.
>> Correct
I like catholic cathedral because those are so beautiful, especially inside of the cathedral.
I like catholic cathedral because those are so beautiful, especially inside of the cathedral.
>> I like Catholic cathedrals because they are so beautiful, especially inside.
So, the reason why I like Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral is that is beautiful and holy.
So, the reason why I like Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral is that is beautiful and holy.
>> So, the reason why I like Myeongdong Catholic Cathedral is that it is beautiful and holy.
Fun fact: I\'m not a catholic, but I like cathedral.
Fun fact: I\'m not a catholic, but I like cathedral.
>> Fun fact: I\'m not a Catholic, but I like cathedrals.
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