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2020-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Are you any good at telling jokes? If so, can you give me an example? I don\'t think I am good at telling jokes because I am not good at remembering funny stories. However, I could find a joke from old episodes called [Choi Bool-am Series]. A man was walking on the street and there was a flying bird above him. The bird suddenly pooped on his head, so the man was angry and shouted to the bird. \"Hey, Don\'t you wear underwear?\" And then, the bird answered. \"Do you poop in your underwear?\" Mr.Choi was one of the most famous actors in Korea in the 1980s to 90s. He had acted as a friendly character so that he was used by an ingredient for humor series.

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Hello there [이름]~
I really liked this joke.
I have never heard about it before but it made me laugh and think too!
Have a good night!


I don\'t think I am good at telling jokes because I am not good at remembering funny stories.
>>CORRECT

However, I could find a joke from old episodes called [Choi Bool-am Series]. 
>>CORRECT

A man was walking on the street and there was a flying bird above him.
>>CORRECT

 The bird suddenly pooped on his head, so the man was angry and shouted to the bird. 
>>The bird suddenly pooped on his head so the man got angry and shouted at the bird.

\"Hey, Don\'t you wear underwear?\" And then, the bird answered.
>>CORRECT

 \"Do you poop in your underwear?\" Mr.Choi was one of the most famous actors in Korea in the 1980s to 90s. 
>> CORRECT

He had acted as a friendly character so that he was used by an ingredient for humor series.
>>He acted as a friendly character that\'s why he was used as an ingredient for comedies.

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