Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is my homework teacher!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I guess you will soon learn how to cook healthy and delicious meals for your family!
Enjoy ^^
Yes, I often buy and eat the food that is already made.
>>CORRECT!
OR: Yes, I often buy and eat packed food.
Especially in my family, we often eat food such as steak and noodles because we often eat delivery food.
>>My family often eats food such as steak and noodles because they often eat delivery food.
There are advantages and disadvantages of buying and eating such pre-made food.
>>CORRECT!
OR: There are pros and cons of buying and eating such pre-made food.
The advantage is that it is very convenient and you don\'t have to cook it yourself, and the downside is that you need that much money.
>>The advantage is that it is very convenient and does not need to cook directly, and the disadvantage is that much money is needed.
I also know that healthy and direct meals at home are healthier and cheaper than buying and eating them.
>>I also know that having healthy, home-cooked meals at home are healthier and cheaper than buying and eating them outside.
That\'s why I\'m planning to eat more home-cooked meals.
>>CORRECT!
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