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What programs do you regularly watch?
I like watching reality show programs and the most favorite program is \"I live alone\" one of the most popular programs in Korea. This TV program shows the normal life of celebrities who live alone. People watch this program because we can observe how they live and how they do when they\'re working or relaxing. It\'s very interesting because you would know how other people live, especially those who work in a different industry. By the way, I think that celebrities use this program to develop their public image. For example, they can show themselves with fake, such as calling their past teacher or going to volunteer. However, I just watch it as fun.
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I like watching reality show programs and the most favorite program is \"I live alone\" one of the most popular programs in Korea.
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This TV program shows the normal life of celebrities who live alone.
>>CORRECT
People watch this program because we can observe how they live and how they do when they\'re working or relaxing.
>>People watch this program because we can observe how they live and what they do when they\'re working or relaxing.
It\'s very interesting because you would know how other people live, especially those who work in a different industry.
>>CORRECT
By the way, I think that celebrities use this program to develop their public image.
>>CORRECT
For example, they can show themselves with fake, such as calling their past teacher or going to volunteer.
>>For example, they can be fake like calling their past teachers or volunteering.
However, I just watch it as fun.
>>However, I just watch it for fun.
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