Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.What is your attitude to smoking?
I know it will be harm for me, but whenever I got stress, I always somked.
2.What is the influence of smoking on health?
It`s harm to lung and could get a cancer. And It cause many disease.
3.What about passive smoking?
It`s also harm to a person who got passive smoking as harm as the smoking person. No, some researchs have a opinion that it might be more harmer than smoking person.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I know it will be harm for me, but whenever I got stress, I always somked.
It`s harm to lung and could get a cancer. And It cause many disease.
It`s also harm to a person who got passive smoking as harm as the smoking person.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
~ T. Tricia
1.What is your attitude to smoking?
I know it will be harm for me, but whenever I got stress, I always somked.
>> I know it will be harmful for me, but whenever I am stress, I always smoke.
2.What is the influence of smoking on health?
2.What is the influence of smoking on health?
It`s harm to lung and could get a cancer. And It cause many disease.
>> It\'s harmful to my lungs and I could get cancer. And It cause many diseases.
3.What about passive smoking?
3.What about passive smoking?
It`s also harm to a person who got passive smoking as harm as the smoking person.
>> It\'s also harmful to a person who is passive smoking as it is to a smoker.
No, some researchs have a opinion that it might be more harmer than smoking person.
>> No, some researchers say that it might be more harmful than smoker.
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