Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you like to read or watch TV in bed? Does this help you to sleep or keep you awake? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I love to watch series and movies in bed.
However, It doesn\'t help me to sleep.
I often watch series before bed time.
It doesn\'t help me to sleep, but it helps me relieve stress.
Watching movies and series is one of the ways to get rid of stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This is pretty straightforward.
It\'s easy to understand and easy to relate to.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I love to watch series and movies in bed.
>> Correct
However, It doesn\'t help me to sleep.
However, It doesn\'t help me to sleep.
>> However, it doesn\'t help me to sleep.
I often watch series before bed time.
I often watch series before bed time.
>> Correct
It doesn\'t help me to sleep, but it helps me relieve stress.
It doesn\'t help me to sleep, but it helps me relieve stress.
>> It doesn\'t help me to sleep but it helps me relieve my stress.
Watching movies and series is one of the ways to get rid of stress.
Watching movies and series is one of the ways to get rid of stress.
>> Correct
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