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I think best job is a doctor. Because doctors save sick people and save lives. The doctor is very tired but proud. I thought the doctor looked cool. Once I wanted to be a doctor, but I gave up. Because I have to study hard to become a doctor. I think worst job is a artist. Because the income is not stable. Then they can have a hard time. So I think best job is doctor, worst job is artist.
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Hello [이름]!!!
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job! That\'s all that I can say with the performance you\'ve shown today! I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!
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T. Jeny
>>I think the best job is a doctor.
Because doctors save sick people and save lives.
>>correct
The doctor is very tired but proud.
>>Being a doctor is a tiring job but it is a prestigious job.
I thought the doctor looked cool.
>>I think doctors look cool.
Once I wanted to be a doctor, but I gave up.
>>correct
Because I have to study hard to become a doctor.
>>correct
I think worst job is a artist.
>>I think the worst job is being an artist.
Because the income is not stable.
>>correct
Then they can have a hard time.
>>correct
So I think best job is doctor, worst job is artist.
>>So I think the best job is a doctor and the worst job is an artist.
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