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I think most people find exercise fun. In our lives, exercise is considered the most important thing for health. People find exercise that is interesting to them. There are many exercises such as swimming, running, hiking, etc.
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Hello [이름]! Nice safe answer. You don\'t like exercising. ^_^
I think most people find exercise fun.
>> Correct.
In our lives, exercise is considered the most important thing for health.
>> In our life, exercise is considered the most important thing for health.
People find exercise that is interesting to them.
>> People find the exercise that is interesting to them.
There are many exercises such as swimming, running, hiking, etc.
>> Correct.
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