Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jean! This is the second homework that I do today!
Here is my homework!!
Not always. I don\'t keep the promise when I play the game.
Because it is fun and addictive a little. And I don\'t keep the promise when I should wake up and sleep.
Because I want to sleep more when I should wake up and I don\'t wanna sleep when It is sleep time.
Thankyou for reading!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your second composition, Bella! I appreciate your sending it!
Cheers,
Jean~~
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Not always. I don\'t keep the promise when I play the game.
Because it is fun and addictive a little.
>> Not always. I don\'t keep my promise when I play games, such as mobile games because it is fun and a little addictive.
And I don\'t keep the promise when I should wake up and sleep.
Because I want to sleep more when I should wake up and I don\'t wanna sleep when It is sleep time.
>> And I don\'t keep the promise when I should wake up and sleep because I wish to sleep more when I should wake up and don\'t want to sleep when it is sleeping time.
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