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We have a freedom in expressing our opinions.
>>>We are free to express our opinions.
So there are a lot of answers about each questions, including very unique answers that we can’t imagine.
>>>So there are many answers to each question, including very unique answers that we cannot imagine.
But answering is free, judging isn’t.
>>>CORRECT!
It means that we can answer ourselves what we feel, but hearing our answer is listeners.
>>>It means we can answer for ourselves, but it\'s the listener who hears our answers.
So we have responsibility for our saying and I believe words reflect our thinking system.
>>>So we are responsible for our words and I believe that words reflect what we thinks.
In this view, I really agree with Voltaire.
>>>CORRECT!
Answering is far more important that questioning.
>>>Answering is far more important than questioning.
Answer can show us who I am and what I think directly.
>>>The answer can directly show who I am and what I think.
It’s the way that we can express ourselves and statement.
>>>CORRECT!
OR: That\'s how we can express and state ourselves.
Also in my case, I usually judging others with there saying.
>>>Also in my case, I usually judge when they speak.
When there are answers that I couldn’t imagine, I embrace it and think like ‘wow, she has unique thinking than me’.
>>>When an answer comes out that I couldn\'t even imagine, I accept and think, \"Wow, she has a more unique thought than I do.\"
Anyway, put together my writing, I really agree with that Voltaire’s statement and in 21st , we have to acknowledge there are countless opinions and mine is not always correct.
>>>Anyway, putting my writing together, I really agree with Voltaire\'s statement. And on the 21st, we have to admit that there are countless opinions and my opinion is not always right.
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