Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If somebody took your home computer away, what would be the biggest problem this would cause you? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
These days, people can work on their phone. However, It is true that using computer is the best.
Personally, I don\'t use my computer often. I use my computer when I do homework or watch series.
If someone took my computer, It will uncomfortable to do computer work.
There are many technology gadgets, but nothing can replace it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m glad you took the time to express yourself today.
This composition is so light.
It\'s so easy to understand.
You did well in giving the correct words and expressions.
Really good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
These days, people can work on their phone.
>> These days, people can work on their phones.
However, It is true that using computer is the best.
>> However, it is true that using the computer is the best.
Personally, I don\'t use my computer often.
Personally, I don\'t use my computer often.
>> Correct
I use my computer when I do homework or watch series.
>> Correct
If someone took my computer, It will uncomfortable to do computer work.
If someone took my computer, It will uncomfortable to do computer work.
>> If someone took my computer, it will be uncomfortable for me if I have to do some computer work.
There are many technology gadgets, but nothing can replace it.
There are many technology gadgets, but nothing can replace it.
>> Correct
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