Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone offered to tell you your future, would you accept it? Why or why not? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
This one is very difficult to answer.
If I should hear everything about my future, I won\\\'t listen that.
However, if I can hear little things like my job, financial situation, and place where I live, I want to know that.
This is because if I could know my future little, I can prepare my future well!
Sometimes, I wish that someone tells the correct answer about my life.
강사 첨삭
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You really make people think.
It shows how smart you are,
I hope you continue inspiring people with your words.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
This one is very difficult to answer.
>> Correct
If I should hear everything about my future, I won\\\'t listen that.
If I should hear everything about my future, I won\\\'t listen that.
>> If I could hear everything about my future, I wouldn\'t even listen.
However, if I can hear little things like my job, financial situation, and place where I live, I want to know that.
>> However, if I can find out about little things like my job, financial situation, and place where I live, I would want to know about those.
This is because if I could know my future little, I can prepare my future well!
This is because if I could know my future little, I can prepare my future well!
>> This is because if I could learn little things about my future, I would be able to prepare for it.
Sometimes, I wish that someone tells the correct answer about my life.
Sometimes, I wish that someone tells the correct answer about my life.
>> Sometimes, I wish that someone would tell me the correct answer about my life.
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