Homework
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I prefer to have a family gathering on vacation or on weekends.
>>>CORRECT!
Vacation is the end of a semester, and weekend is the end of a week.
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I like to get together with my family at the end of the day.
>>>CORRECT!
OR: I like to meet my family after all.
It can be an opportunity to talk about secrets that you couldn\'t tell, talk about things that happened, and get to know each other a little bit.
>>>It can be an opportunity to talk about secrets that you couldn\'t tell, talk about what happened, and get to know each other little by little.
These days, I\'m too busy to have a family gathering, but I\'m always ready to have a family gathering.
>>>These days I\'m too busy and I can\'t meet them often, but I\'m always ready for a family gathering.
I have to say let\'s do it this week.
>>>CORRECT!
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