Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is my homework.
강사 첨삭
Hi again!
Here\'s the second homework :)
I guess your hat is already with someone - HAHAHA :)
I don\'t lose things easily, so I\'ve never lost anything important like a wallet or a phone while traveling.
>>>CORRECT!
OR: I\'ve never lost an important thing like a wallet or a phone during a trip because I don\'t easily lose things.
The biggest thing I lost while traveling is a hat.
>>>The biggest thing I lost while traveling was a hat.
When I went on a trip to Kota Kinabalu in Malaysia, I always wore a hat because it was too strong in the sun.
>>>When I traveled to Kota Kinabalu, Malaysia, the sun was so high that I always wore a hat.
But when I was preparing to go back home, I realized that my hat was missed.
>>>But as I was getting ready to go back home, I realized my hat is missing.
I\'ve tried to find it, but it\'s already late.
>>>I tried to find it, but it\'s already late.
It was probably because I lost it when I was swimming.
>>>I probably may have lost it when I went swimming.
It\'s the biggest thing I lost during my trip, and I don\'t think I have anything else.
>>>CORRECT!
I think I don\'t lose it because I always try to be careful and keep my things.
>>>I don\'t think I lost it because I kept my belongings carefully.
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