Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is my homework. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi again!
Here\'s the second homework.
Thank you :)
From the beginning, I want to give a correct answer.
>>>CORRECT!
OR: From the beginning, I want to give an accurate answer.
The best way to deal with failure is just acknowledging.
>>>CORRECT!
OR: The best way to deal with failure is just to admit it.
Many of people who around us, not only my family but also many friends, when we first meet failure or difficulty, we often avoid and tend to not believe.
>>>Many people who around us, not only my family but also many friends, when we first meet failure or difficulty, we often avoid and tend not to believe.
And finally it reaches to only excuses.
>>>CORRECT!
Through acknowledging about what we did, we could develop one more step to real adult.
>>>By admitting what we did, we were able to take a step closer to being a real adult.
I also know acknowledging my failure is very difficult thing to do, and that’s why it’s way to become real adult.
>>>I also know acknowledging failure is very difficult and that\'s why it\'s one step closer to being an adult.
After acknowledging, we have to try to not repeat that failure.
>>>After acknowledging, we should try not to repeat that failure.
And that’s it. It’s all.
>>>That\'s all.
There’s no one perfect in this world, and people learn through experience.
>>>No one is perfect in this world and people learn from experience.
I think that’s why human-being and our ancestors could live until these days from long long time ago.
>>>That\'s why humans and our ancestors have been able to live to this day for a long time.
It’s acknowledging, learning, trying.
>>>It’s acknowledging, learning and trying.
So all of us, don’t be afraid failure !!!
>>>All of us shouldn\'t be afraid of failure!
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