Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is my homework :)
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
I bet traffic in your city is different compared to other city\'s in Korea.
I hope that the government would consider the effect of adding more transport to our environment.
Thank you for sharing :)
I think this is very difficult question. Kkk
>>>I think this is a very difficult question.
Because I have to consider both side, government and public.
>>>Because I have to consider both the government and the people.
In terms of public, like me, it’s very amazing news that the number of public transport are increased.
>>>From the public point of view, it\'s amazing that the number of public transportation has increased.
OR: From a public point of view, it is surprising that the number of public transportation has increased.
First it’s really comfortable.
>>>First of all, it\'s really comfortable.
Please thinking that around our house, if there are bus, subway, taxi or airplane, I will travel everyday all day long!
>>>Imagine if a bus, subway, taxi, or plane are near my house, I can travel all day.
Not only is it comfortable, but even if one means of transportation is missed, there are many other alternatives, so there is less to worry about.
>>>CORRECT!
OR: Not only is it convenient, but even if you miss one means of transportation, you have a lot of other alternatives, so you have less to worry about.
From the government\'s point of view, however, increasing the number of vehicles recklessly leads to greater traffic congestion and strengthening of the appropriate laws, which are followed by great pains across all sectors of society.
>>>CORRECT!
Therefore, I think it is most important not simply to increase the number of public transportation but to make a decision through sufficient negotiation between the government and citizens.
>>>Therefore, I think the most important thing is not just to increase public transportation, but to make a decision through sufficient negotiation between the government and citizens.
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