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l am gonna introduce my family .
My family is 5 persons.
I have 2 daughters and 1 son.of course i have 1 wife.not 2 wives.
My 1st daughter is 3rd grade of middle school.
I think she is pretty but she is not always pretty.
My 1st son is 2nd grade of middle school.
They are students same school.
Lots of people say that he looks like me.also i agree with them.i think he is smart why he resembles me.
And my 2nd daughter is 5 years old.
She is always cute and lovely.
But sometimes she annoys me.
But i think that \"if she didn\'t annoy me,she wouldn\'t be baby\"
This is my familly.
Thank you
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby
l am gonna introduce my family .
>> Correct.
My family is 5 persons.
My family is 5 persons.
>> We\'re 5 in the family.
I have 2 daughters and 1 son.of course i have 1 wife.not 2 wives.
I have 2 daughters and 1 son.of course i have 1 wife.not 2 wives.
>> I have 2 daughters, 1 son and my wife.
My 1st daughter is 3rd grade of middle school.
My 1st daughter is 3rd grade of middle school.
>> My 1st daughter is in 3rd grade at middle school.
I think she is pretty but she is not always pretty.
I think she is pretty but she is not always pretty.
>> Correct.
My 1st son is 2nd grade of middle school.
My 1st son is 2nd grade of middle school.
>> Correct.
They are students same school.
They are students same school.
>> They are students in the same school.
Lots of people say that he looks like me.also i agree with them.i think he is smart why he resembles me.
Lots of people say that he looks like me.also i agree with them.i think he is smart why he resembles me.
>> Lots of people say that he looks like me, an I agree with them. I think he is smart that\'s why he resembles me.
And my 2nd daughter is 5 years old.
And my 2nd daughter is 5 years old.
>> Correct.
She is always cute and lovely.
She is always cute and lovely.
>> Correct.
But sometimes she annoys me.
But sometimes she annoys me.
>> Correct.
But i think that \"if she didn\'t annoy me,she wouldn\'t be baby\"
But i think that \"if she didn\'t annoy me,she wouldn\'t be baby\"
>> Correct.
This is my family.
This is my family.
>> Correct.
Thank you.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
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