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What caused the popularity of fast food restaurants?
What do you think are the effects of this popularity?
There are lots of fast-food restaurants all over the world. I can find a Mcdonald\'s in almost every city in any country. In Seoul, there is a fast-food restaurant in almost every street. There are some reasons that the popularity of fast-food restaurants. First, fast-food is delicious. This is the main factor in its popularity. Second, we can simply eat it. We don\'t have to wait many minutes. If you decide to eat fast-food then all you have to do is to find a fast-food restaurant and you can have it in 10 minutes. Also, you would be quite full after eating it. However, I don\'t think fast-food is good for your health. It makes people fatter and weaker.
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There are lots of fast-food restaurants all over the world.
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I can find a Mcdonald\'s in almost every city in any country.
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In Seoul, there is a fast-food restaurant in almost every street.
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There are some reasons that the popularity of fast-food restaurants.
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First, fast-food is delicious.
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This is the main factor in its popularity.
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Second, we can simply eat it.
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We don\'t have to wait many minutes.
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If you decide to eat fast-food then all you have to do is to find a fast-food restaurant and you can have it in 10 minutes.
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Also, you would be quite full after eating it.
>>CORRECT
However, I don\'t think fast-food is good for your health.
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It makes people fatter and weaker.
>>CORRECT
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