Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t enjoy meeting new people.
Because It is a burden to me.
I need to think about topic or activity to play with them
But meeting a new people is a part of social life,
So, associating with new people is a source of trouble to me
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! ^^
I agree with you. You definitely need to think of ways on how to be close with someone whenever you meet them.
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
See you in class!
- T. Rina
1. I don\'t enjoy meeting new people.
>> CORRECT!
2. Because It is a burden to me.
2. Because It is a burden to me.
>> CORRECT!
3. I need to think about topic or activity to play with them
3. I need to think about topic or activity to play with them
>> I need to think about topics or activities to do with them.
4. But meeting a new people is a part of social life,
>> But meeting new people is a part of social life.
4. But meeting a new people is a part of social life,
>> But meeting new people is a part of social life.
OR: But meeting new people is a part of socializing.
5. So, associating with new people is a source of trouble to me
>> CORRECT!
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