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2020-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Melody

학생이 쓴 원문

1. make - Did you really make this ring for me? T[이름]k you so much. 2. meet - I can\'t meet you guys for two weeks because I plan to go trip with my family to Hawaii. 3. melt - If you keep that ice cream on your desk constantly, it will melt away. 4. miss - You should not have missed the game. It was amazing. 5. mop - I have always mopped the floor so It\'s your turn from now on. 6. memorize - That song has so difficult lyrics so I cannot memorize it. 7. measure - Mom measured the length of my window in my room to buy new curtains.

강사 첨삭

1. Did you really make this ring for me? 
>>CORRECT
OR>>Did you really make this beautiful ring for me?

2. T[이름]k you so much.
>>T[이름]k you so much!

3. I can\'t meet you guys for two weeks because I plan to go trip with my family to Hawaii.
>>I can\'t meet you guys for two weeks because I have a plan to go on a trip with my family to Hawaii.

4. If you keep that ice cream on your desk constantly, it will melt away.
>>If you keep that ice cream on your desk, it will melt away.

5. You should not have missed the game. 
>>CORRECT
OR>>You should have watched the game.

6. It was amazing.
>>It was amazing!

7. I have always mopped the floor so It\'s your turn from now on.
>>I have always mopped the floor, so it\'s your turn from now on.

8. That song has so difficult lyrics so I cannot memorize it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>That song has very difficult lyrics, so I can\'t memorize it.

9. Mom measured the length of my window in my room to buy new curtains.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My mom measured the length of the window in my room to buy new curtains.


Very good, Michelle!
Keep on practicing making long sentences.

- T. Melody ^^

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