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Health is most of important.
If health lost,it will lose everything.
I had been smoking at least for 25 years.
But not now
I stopped smoking 6 years ago.
This is what i did the best thing all my life
Sometimes i used to tell to my wife.
\"We got third baby because i stopped smoking.\"
I try to eat breakfast everymorning.
if i don\'t eat it,i will eat lots of food for lunch or dinner.
eating lots of food is that is not good for me.
if possible, i always try to eat small.
but it always do that is hard.
And i had been playing tennis.
But i can\'t these days
Korea government restricted the place.
It is why i gain my weight.
Anyway becareful from covid 19.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T. Gabby :)
Health is most of important.
>> Health is the most of important.
If health lost,it will lose everything.
If health lost,it will lose everything.
>> If you\'re not healthy, you can lose everything.
I had been smoking at least for 25 years.
I had been smoking at least for 25 years.
>> I smoked for 25 years.
But not now
But not now
>> But not anymore.
I stopped smoking 6 years ago.
I stopped smoking 6 years ago.
>> Correct.
This is what i did the best thing all my life
This is what i did the best thing all my life
>> This is the best thing that I did in my entire life.
Sometimes i used to tell to my wife.
Sometimes i used to tell to my wife.
>> Sometimes I used to tell my wife.
\"We got third baby because i stopped smoking.\"
\"We got third baby because i stopped smoking.\"
>> \"We had our third baby that\'s why I stopped smoking.\"
I try to eat breakfast everymorning.
I try to eat breakfast everymorning.
>> I try to eat breakfast every morning.
if i don\'t eat it,i will eat lots of food for lunch or dinner.
if i don\'t eat it,i will eat lots of food for lunch or dinner.
>> If i don\'t, I will eat lots of food for lunch or dinner.
eating lots of food is that is not good for me.
eating lots of food is that is not good for me.
>> Eating lots of food is that is not good for me.
if possible, i always try to eat small.
if possible, i always try to eat small.
>> Correct.
but it always do that is hard.
but it always do that is hard.
>> But it always do that even if it\'s hard.
And i had been playing tennis.
And i had been playing tennis.
>> And I have been playing tennis.
But i can\'t these days
But i can\'t these days
>> Correct.
Korea government restricted the place.
Korea government restricted the place.
>> Correct.
It is why i gain my weight.
It is why i gain my weight.
>> That\'s why I gained weight.
Anyway becareful from covid 19.
Anyway becareful from covid 19.
>> Correct.
Thank you.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
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