Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. If you were reborn in a new life, would you rather be alive in the past or future?
A. I would like to be alive in the past. I don\'t know how the life will be in the future but I know how it has been in the past. I\'m not sure whether the world would be good for living or not in the future as we see the environment destroyed and viruses spreading. I think it would be better to be less convenient than more automated life. And I also want to go through my past years again and meet people who I miss.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for devoting a little time with your homework. I really appreciate it. ^ ^
Thanks for your thoughts as well. I would definitely choose to live in the past too, as we already know how the current situation is and the future! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I would like to be alive in the past.
>>CORRECT OR
>>I would like to live in the past.
I don\'t know how the life will be
in the future but I know how it has been in the past.
>>I don\'t know how life would be in the future but I know how it has been in the past.
I\'m not sure
whether the world would be good for living or not in the future as we
see the environment destroyed and viruses spreading.
>>I\'m not sure whether the world would still be a good place to live in in the future as we are now experiencing environmental changes and virus spreading.
I think it would be
better to be less convenient than more automated life.
>>I think it would be better to live having less conveniences that having an automated life.
And I also want
to go through my past years again and meet people who I miss.
>>CORRECT
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