homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
How would you change the world if you could?
Nowadays, the coronavirus hits all over the world and I am quite tired that people concern about this. If I could change the world, I would remove this virus immediately.
* I got a job offer from a global company today. Thus, I replied as below, so can you check it if I\'ve written awkwardly?
Thanks for your invitation and I am interested in the opportunity. However, I want to check the JD first because I\'ve been working in a data center since I got into this company and my job is quite far from source coding. If you offer me the JD then I will reply with my resume.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer!
I hope this will help you!
Have a good night!
>>CORRECT
* I got a job offer from a global company today.
If I could change the world, I would remove this virus immediately.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
* I got a job offer from a global company today.
>>CORRECT
Thus, I replied as below, so can you check it if I\'ve written awkwardly?
Thanks for your invitation and I am interested in the opportunity.
>>CORRECT
>>Thank you for your this opportunity.
>> I would like to say I am very interested in this invitation.
However, I want to check the JD first because I\'ve been working in a data center since I got into this company and my job is quite far from source coding.
>>However, I would like to know the job description first because I\'ve been working in a data center since I got into this company and my job is quite different from source coding.
If you offer me the JD then I will reply with my resume.
>>If you send me the job description, I will reply with my resume.
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