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HOMEWORK: What does “inner beauty” mean to you? Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beauty? Why/why not?
i think inner beatuy is kind heart or good personality.
plastic surgery will still be beauty. at least in korea.
korean people value women\'s beauty. ex) body profile is trend in korea.
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Good evening [이름]! Thank you so much for your thoughts regarding this topics. I appreciate it.
T. Irene
HOMEWORK: What does “inner beauty” mean to you? Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beauty? Why/why not?
i think inner beatuy is kind heart or good personality.
>>> I think inner beauty is having a kind heart and a good personality.
plastic surgery will still be beauty. at least in korea.
>>> Plastic surgery is still considered being beautiful, at least it\'s true in Korea.
korean people value women\'s beauty. ex) body profile is trend in korea.
i think inner beatuy is kind heart or good personality.
>>> I think inner beauty is having a kind heart and a good personality.
plastic surgery will still be beauty. at least in korea.
>>> Plastic surgery is still considered being beautiful, at least it\'s true in Korea.
korean people value women\'s beauty. ex) body profile is trend in korea.
>>> Korean people value beauty in women. Example is the body profile which became a trend now in Korea.
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