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I don\'t like a trend of using disposable products
It is convinient to use disposable products but
trash become increase like plastic and vinyl.
So We must decrease using disposable products for environmental conservation
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Happy Monday, [이름]! :)
I totally agree with you.
There\'s too much trash nowadays, especially in oceans because of disposable products.
I hope people will realize the danger of these products.
Thank you for giving your opinion.
See you in class! :)
See you in class! :)
- T. Rina
1. I don\'t like a trend of using disposable products
>> I don\'t like the trend of using disposable products.
>> I don\'t like the trend of using disposable products.
2. It is convinient to use disposable products but trash become increase like plastic and vinyl.
>> It is convenient to use disposable products but trash is increasing like plastics and vinyls.
>> It is convenient to use disposable products but trash is increasing like plastics and vinyls.
3. So We must decrease using disposable products for environmental conservation
>> CORRECT!
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