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it was rain this weekend.
korea government required what people don\'t go out because corona-19 spreads. if they allowed,they couldn\'t have controled that.
the patients are increasing more than more.
the patients number were like 30 a day 2 weeks ago.but the number are increasing about even 300 a day these days.
it is why i stayed in my place all day.
but i had been to bundang city at a saturday.
It took me about 40 minutes from my place by my car.
my eldest daughter and son have to exercise there everey saturday.
we always have lunch after exercise. but the day could not.
on the way i went back my place i had bought some meat by market for my family.
we ate the barbecue for dinner in my place instead of go to out a restaurant.
i am warried about what i am gonna have a corona-19.
anyway it is not funny weekend. corona-19 make us a unhappy.
Thank you.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby :)
it was rain this weekend.
>> It was raining this weekend.
korea government required what people don\'t go out because corona-19 spreads.
korea government required what people don\'t go out because corona-19 spreads.
>> Korean government required people to don\'t go out because of corona-19 spreads.
if they allowed,they couldn\'t have controled that.
>> If they will allow it,they couldn\'t have controlled that.
the patients are increasing more than more.
the patients are increasing more than more.
>> The patients are increasing more every day.
the patients number were like 30 a day 2 weeks ago.
the patients number were like 30 a day 2 weeks ago.
>> The patients were like 30 a day 2 weeks ago.
but the number are increasing about even 300 a day these days.
>> Correct.
it is why i stayed in my place all day.
it is why i stayed in my place all day.
>> That\'s why I stayed in my place all day.
but i had been to bundang city at a saturday.
but i had been to bundang city at a saturday.
>> But i had been to bundang city last saturday.
It took me about 40 minutes from my place by my car.
It took me about 40 minutes from my place by my car.
>> Correct.
my eldest daughter and son have to exercise there everey saturday.
my eldest daughter and son have to exercise there everey saturday.
>> My eldest daughter and son have to exercise there every Saturday.
we always have lunch after exercise. but the day could not.
we always have lunch after exercise. but the day could not.
>> We always have lunch after we exercise, but we did not eat that day.
on the way i went back my place i had bought some meat by market for my family.
on the way i went back my place i had bought some meat by market for my family.
>> On the way i went back to my place and bought some meat in the market for my family.
we ate the barbecue for dinner in my place instead of go to out a restaurant.
we ate the barbecue for dinner in my place instead of go to out a restaurant.
>> We ate barbecue for dinner in my place instead of going out in a restaurant.
i am warried about what i am gonna have a corona-19.
i am warried about what i am gonna have a corona-19.
>> I am worried about having corona-19.
anyway it is not funny weekend. corona-19 make us a unhappy.
anyway it is not funny weekend. corona-19 make us a unhappy.
>> Anyway it is not a fun weekend. Corona-19 makes us all unhappy.
Thank you.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
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