Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s my homework :)
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
It\'s good that you started learning English early.
So, in the future you should be teaching your nieces and nephews to speak English while they are still young - HEHEHE.
I think it’s because English is the most popular and general language all over the world.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I think it\'s because English is the most popular and common language in the world.
Like, Korea it’s only our citizen who really use Korean in their lives.
>>Korea is the only country that speaks Korean in our whole life.
But, like English, we could use it wherever we are in the whole world because it’s the language that can communicate regardless with race.
>>But like English, we can use it anywhere in the world. Because it is a language that can communicate regardless of race.
So it’s the reason why people want to learn English.
>>That\'s why people want to learn English.
It’s really convenient when we travel another world.
>>It\'s really convenient when we travel around the other world.
I have learned English from baby, and I think that is my mother’s big plan for my life.
>>I have started English when I was a baby and I think that\'s my mothers big plan.
Kkkk
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