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Hi again!
This is for the second homework [이름]!
Thank you :)
These days, Korea’s pandemic is getting worse.
>>These days, the craze in Korea is getting worse.
Before like this bad situation, pandemic was already over thanks to government’s coping method.
>>Before this bad situation, the craze has already ended thanks to the government\'s handling of the situation.
I don’t know what is the specific policies that we are executing, but for that policies Korea’s pandemic was a little bit eased up.
>>I don\'t know what specific policies we are implementing, but the policy has eased the craze in Korea a little.
So I think our government management of pandemic is good.
>>So I think our government\'s management of the pandemic is good.
It’s really bad things that pandemic is in progress, but I think it will be fine after few months later.
>>It\'s really bad that the epidemic is going on, but I think it\'ll be okay in a few months.
And one of the decisive method will be our strong policies.
>>CORRECT!
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