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What is the best way to eradicate ignorance in the society?
I don\'t think we can eradicate ignorance 100% in the society. However, there are some ways to reduce the percentage. First, schools need to educate their students about the way how they think by themselves. I think ignorance in society came from the attitude of how people don\'t want to think. Second, we need to make the culture or mood to respect people who can think by themself, so we can make people can insist on his think and opinion to others naturally.
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I don\'t think we can eradicate ignorance 100% in the society.
>>CORRECT
However, there are some ways to reduce the percentage.
>>CORRECT
First, schools need to educate their students about the way how they think by themselves.
>>CORRECT
I think ignorance in society came from the attitude of how people don\'t want to think.
>>CORRECT
Second, we need to make the culture or mood to respect people who can think by themself, so we can make people can insist on his think and opinion to others naturally.
>>Second, we need to make the culture or mood to respect people who can think by themselves so we can make people insist on thinking about their opinions to others naturally.
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