homework
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What part of this city do you like the best? Why?
I like a soccer field what part of my town.
When I live in Gyeongsan doesn\'t have a soccer field, so I have to play soccer in my school.
Even there was not grass or artificial turf, there was a sand play ground.
But, here has disadvantage too.
A soccer club comes to play at from 8 P.M to 10 P.M, so I have to wate 2hours.
However, I like my towns soccer field.
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I like a soccer field what part of my town.
>>I like the soccer field that is in my town.
When I live in Gyeongsan doesn\'t have a soccer field, so I have to play soccer in my school.
>>When I lived in Gyeongsan, it doesn\'t have a soccer field so I have to play soccer in my school.
Even there was not grass or artificial turf, there was a sand play ground.
>>Even there was not a grass or artificial turf, there was sand on the playground.
But, here has disadvantage too.
>>But, it is also a disadvantage.
A soccer club comes to play at from 8 P.M to 10 P.M, so I have to wate 2hours.
>>A soccer club comes to play from 8 p.m. to 10 p.m. so I have to wait for 2 hours.
However, I like my towns soccer field.
>>However, I like my town\'s soccer field.
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