homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you will be having a dream, what would you like to dream?
I want to dream to go to space.
There are two reasons.
First, I want to simulation to exploration space, but I can\'t simulation or exploration space.
Second, I want to see the beautiful world.
강사 첨삭
Hello Paul! Your sentences in your homework are improving. I like it! Keep it up! :)
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
I want to dream to go to space.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I want to dream about going to space.
There are two reasons.
>>CORRECT
First, I want to simulation to exploration space, but I can\'t simulation or exploration space.
>>First I want to do simulation to explore the space but I can\'t simulate or explore the space.
Second, I want to see the beautiful world.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I want to see how beautiful the world is.
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